This is my first draft of my mashup. I think it definitely needs some help in some parts! But it is about child beauty pageants along with the negative affects and how it is being banned in France. I am not a fan of what child beauty pageants are doing to our younger kids these days and I wanted to show what they do to their self-esteem and what their future will be like. Please help me to make this somewhat better! :)
For off I saw your topic and i thought it was very similar to my friend's topic that had this class last semester so if you want to check out her mash up here's the link http://rachburrell.weebly.com/mash-up.html.
In the beginning of your video I like that you have the definition of the beauty pageant, but the music should continue to play over it.
I think your historical clip is good but really long, so i would cut that down. Also I think your transitions are a bit rough and the volume needs to be fixed so it's all the same. But good job your on the right track!
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Amanda Vignali
5/8/2014 06:02:21 am
My partner never got around to posting her video, so I figured I would comment on yours! I love your topic! I love the short clips that you have used of the little girls. I also really like how you have videos of them speaking about how they do not care what others think. I also loved how you used older videos of pageants and the song "Barbie Girl." I think the song that goes "we're not going to take it" is very appropriate for the images you used with it. My biggest con would be the sound. You should try to transition your songs smoother. Also your volume goes from being very quiet to very loud. That is something I would adjust also. Good luck with the rest of your project!
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I am Nicole Salerno. Please feel free to comment on my blogs. :)